Thursday, December 8, 2011

Can you fix my grammar / improve my sentence for me?

I wish I had a saving's account to deposited all my free time to withdraw them in busy time like this.|||I wish time was like money and you could deposit it into an account for withdrawal when you most needed it.|||I wish I had a savings account that I could deposit all my free time into, so in a busy time like this I could withdraw it.

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